The Needlehole Mysteries [2]
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Fanfic Work-a-hobbit part 12
Warning. This chapter have been deemed a a bit 'risque' and made people giggle and might make you blush. Proceed with caution.
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- Ringo clenched and unclenched his fists. He should go. He should not be listening in on his employer and his best friend. And he should not be thinking how easy it would be to sneak closer and peek through the door. But he had already taken a mental note of the different exits and hiding places he could use if he was spotted and had to run. (He was still a bit shaken by the cod liver oil incident. Never again.)
Under normal circumstances he would have closed his eyes and ears and let Eldo have his privacy. Perhaps it was a side effect of breathing inn the odd perfume, but this was all too weird to ignore. Why would Eldo risk the wrath of Nora, and why in Ringo's clothes? He swore quietly at himself. Then he rolled up his mask, crept silently against the wall and opened the door just a creek. His jaw dropped as he took in the sight. It seemed they had started with your every day crab job, and when you've seen one crab job you have pretty much seen them all. But this was something else entirely. Double squidding! That was some truly advanced wrangling. Ringo felt his pulse quickening, he could hardly believe that Eldo could handle this. He nearly burst through the door as the largest squid made a daring move, Julia gasped, but Eldo never lost his focus and didn't need to be saved.
A warm feeling filled him from top to toe. That was a man he was proud to say had his back. And vice versa.
His clothes hung a bit looser around Eldo's frame than they did on Ringo, but he did look good. Funny how a set of clothes can make you see someone differently. But he had to admit, that shirt had never had quite so many arms inside it at once. Damn, Eldo! he thought. How come I knew nothing about this? He bit his lip. When was the last time the two of them had spent time together, alone? From the look of things Eldo had come here a lot. Perhaps he didn't think Ringo wanted to come. And this was not Nora's idea of a good time. Not at all. But look how his eyes shines, his muscles flexing, Figg's approving nods and encouragements, tentacles everywhere...
Ringo pulled away. He hastened around the corner and stood still for a moment, catching his breath and calming his beating heart. And now he knew what to do, how to make things right. His shift was over, he hastened to change back into his own clothing, realizing with a grin that they now had matching outfits. Then he returned, leaned against the wall at an appropriate distance from the room and waited for Eldo to come out.
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-Mrs Figg
"Everything we hear is an opinion, not a fact. Everything we see is a perspective, not the truth."
-Marcus Aurelius
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Two parter, unless you can't wait. This was what I had for now.
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"Everything we hear is an opinion, not a fact. Everything we see is a perspective, not the truth."
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Wow indeed ! border line erotic ! Are you blushing Eldo ?!
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dont b so stereotypical ariel
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eddie redmayne ringa u sew dreamy
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Eldorion wrote:I...
Uh...
Wow
Too much? Should I add spoilers tags and warnings?
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Hee hee ! NO!
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Amarië wrote: Too much? Should I add spoilers tags and warnings?
Far be it from me to censor creative expression, but I have to confess that I didn't expect quite this risque a turn.
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omg.... æ ælske dæ AMARIE!!! <3 absolutely brilliant!! I am dying !! there so many good implications he..he..(omg.. i have to follow up on this O_O glad this is a two parter )
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Eldorion wrote:Amarië wrote: Too much? Should I add spoilers tags and warnings?
Far be it from me to censor creative expression, but I have to confess that I didn't expect quite this risque a turn.
Warnings and spoilers it is. I guess I should be a bit proud.
Two pages of "nugde nudge, know what I mean?" jokes and gifs, a story that is clearly escalating and you didn't see this coming. You write detective stories, you say?
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I wasn't expecting you guys to that far, but if anyone was going to, I'd have assumed it would be Norc.
Don't let me stop you two from expressing your inner muse, though.
Don't let me stop you two from expressing your inner muse, though.
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Eldorion wrote:I wasn't expecting you guys to that far, but if anyone was going to, I'd have assumed it would be Norc.
whaat? what i have done to earn that.. oh.. wait..
Eldorion wrote:Don't let me stop you two from expressing your inner muse, though.
translation: I frankly don't giva a damn what u do to these character loosely based on my self and this other guy. i am eagerly awating the next instalment actually. i really enjoy this. i am just gonna be polite and humble and just say i am ok with this (but i am actually more than ok with it.. ) so people don't think tha...(and so forth)
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Eldorion wrote:I wasn't expecting you guys to that far, but if anyone was going to, I'd have assumed it would be Norc.
Don't let me stop you two from expressing your inner muse, though.
Is this a good time to say that I actually toned it down a bit?
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shhh... just keep going, i want the next part (don't tone it down ^^, though i don't know how to follow up on this... )
Eldo, you should've really seen this coming.. srsly.
Eldo, you should've really seen this coming.. srsly.
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Amarië wrote:Is this a good time to say that I actually toned it down a bit?
Well now that you bring it up, you have to show us the Extended Edition or I just won't be able to bear the curiosity.
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Norc wrote:translation: I frankly don't giva a damn what u do to these character loosely based on my self and this other guy. i am eagerly awating the next instalment actually. i really enjoy this. i am just gonna be polite and humble and just say i am ok with this (but i am actually more than ok with it.. ) so people don't think tha...(and so forth)
Whatever gave you that idea.
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sneeky bastard. you did ofcourse. i'm gonna be nice and not share it with everyone.
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With you two writing such interesting stuff, I couldn't resist throwing my hat into the ring.
Not for younger or sensitive types.
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Not for younger or sensitive types.
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With you two writing such interesting stuff, I couldn't resist throwing my hat into the ring. - Eldorion
I KNEW YOU'DE DO IT!
(note; haven't read that yet...)
I KNEW YOU'DE DO IT!
(note; haven't read that yet...)
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Atta boy, Eldo! I knew you had it in you.
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Hopefully it amused people other than me. I know I said "to be continued" but it probably won't be.
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