How Eldo Got His Groove Back

Kafria wrote:Really enjoyed this Eldo,
the characterisations had me giggling in the first few paragraphs and it pulled me in quickly.
The dialogue flowed well, something I am a little jealous of as I always find this really difficult.

Thanks for sharing

Thanks for reading, and I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! I sometimes worry that I rely too heavily on dialogue since I feel more confident writing that than some other sorts of narrative description. I'm glad that the dialogue flowed well though, I was hoping it would. Having such a colorful cast of characters on the forum to draw inspiration from definitely helps.

Write to your strengths and work on your weaknesses- thats what I say Eldo.
You do good dialogue, so dont be afraid to do it a lot.

've read some, not all, but I'm expecting the TARDIS

halfwise wrote:Norc will be jealous.

No TARDISes I'm afraid, but hopefully the time travel is still to your liking.

Dialogue is everything, as stories have characters, and we learn something of character by hearing them speak for themselves. That's my opinion, and I'm right!

Have read the story. It was truly great! (and don't worry about the dialog, you're doing just fine ^^).

Thanks, Norc! I really appreciate that.

NB Orwell, I shall take your words to heart.

Eldorion

Ally?

Now THAT is dialogue!

Amarie

Did you just call me Amary, Loremaster?
Though I guess that is what the Shire Hobbits call me, so I suppose it is a bit of a grey area.

Norc.